Many people attend the university or college for different reasons. I consider that people go to the university or college to get a degree for their career, increase knowledge for expanding their interests and experience new things.
Today, some people believe that no matter you have a degree or not, you can get a job if you have a special skill and ability of communication with other people. That's true. Some companies don't pay attention to the degree. However, most companies especially major companies still think that the dgree is important because it prove that you studied and you are sophisticated and educated person. I think that's one of the reason why people attend the university or college.
Secondly, people choose to go to the university to increase their knowledge. Each person have own field, interest of course. University provide you varieties of knowledge. For example, university give you many opportunities to leanrn on a specialized field. Your knowledge can be expanding more and more.
People attend the university or college to have a lot of new experiences. For them, it may be a first time to live without familiy. Also you can meet many new people from different places and join the circle and club activities. Your relationship with other people becomes better and better.
Furthemore, you can get a chance to perticipate in the internship. You can experience the real job before your guraduation. It also can be a preparation for your future.
Universities and colleges provide you degree and numbers of knowledge. Also they give you good environment to experience new things. As a result, I think many people attend the university and college because they have these reasons.
Today, some people believe that no matter you have a degree or not, you can get a job if you have a special skill and ability of communication with other people. That's true. Some companies don't pay attention to the degree. However, most companies especially major companies still think that the dgree is important because it prove that you studied and you are sophisticated and educated person. I think that's one of the reason why people attend the university or college.
Secondly, people choose to go to the university to increase their knowledge. Each person have own field, interest of course. University provide you varieties of knowledge. For example, university give you many opportunities to leanrn on a specialized field. Your knowledge can be expanding more and more.
People attend the university or college to have a lot of new experiences. For them, it may be a first time to live without familiy. Also you can meet many new people from different places and join the circle and club activities. Your relationship with other people becomes better and better.
Furthemore, you can get a chance to perticipate in the internship. You can experience the real job before your guraduation. It also can be a preparation for your future.
Universities and colleges provide you degree and numbers of knowledge. Also they give you good environment to experience new things. As a result, I think many people attend the university and college because they have these reasons.
Original: Today, some people believe that no matter you have a degree or not, you can get a job if you have a special skill and ability of communication with other people.
ReplyDeleteSuggestion: The using of “no matter+ who, what, where, or when” is the same to “whoever, whatever, wherever, or whenever”. For example: Do whatever you like. However, the meaning of your sentence is “Some people believe whether you have a degree or not, you can get a job.”
Correction: Today, some people believe whether you have a degree or not, you can get a job if you have a special skill and ability of communication with other people.
Hi Nana,
ReplyDeleteI really like your composition. Your english is good^^ and there is not much errors, just some spelling mistakes here and there. "Furthermore, you can get a chance to participate in the internship".
You can change your heading to "Why attend University"
Have a good day!!
~Deborah~
Hi~Nanna,
ReplyDeleteYour composition is really good!
I like the way you used the phrases and words.
There is not much errors.You did a great job!>"<
I hope you can come to my blog~
Thank you~
by Emily
Hi Nana
ReplyDeleteYou have a complete ideals and organization. Your choices of words are precise.
By Jack
hi~NANA!!!
ReplyDeleteYou did a perfect job on this composition, the organization of the article is in great order, and you did use the transitional words very well.
The only common for you is that on the second line of paragraph two "Each person have own field" i think it is better to add a word their and make it become "Each person have their own field".
>>by~sharon
Hi Nana
ReplyDeleteIn your essey, there are some wrong words and grammar error. I think you can put your essey on the Word. It can help you correct the wrong place. Welcome to Taiwan. :D Good luck.
Mike
Hello Nana!
ReplyDeleteI'm Josh. I really like your composition. From this eassy, it makes me understand why people attending the university. The organization of it is clear. Beside, you can use precise words in it. I can make me realize you do this eassy with lots of efforts.
Sincerly,
Josh
Hi~Nana
ReplyDeleteIt's clear that you had made many details to support your ideas. However, there semmes to have some grammra mistakes. Maybe you could check your writting twice then you can not only have a correct article but also to improve your grammar. Good to you.
by~Jean